I like your story. I am curious to know why the main character eats all the time. Now I think you can write a scene from a conversation some of the characters may have in Marroco's family. Show me the conversation before you publish it and we can discuss it.
I like your story. I am curious to know why the main character eats all the time. Now I think you can write a scene from a conversation some of the characters may have in Marroco's family. Show me the conversation before you publish it and we can discuss it.
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